Pearl Rear Vision
The website
“https://www.pearlauto.com” puts forward the purpose, features and advantages of
the product. Pearl Rear Vision is a
solar powered backup camera for cars which provides the driver with extensive
vision of the car’s surroundings. With state-of-the-art image processing
of “high dynamic range scenes”, the rear-view screen is viewable under direct
sunlight while the dark mode enables visibility in inferior light
situation. It has a caution system which provides the driver with
auricular and visional caution when there are obstructions to the lane caused
by incoming traffic. The caution may be in the form of an undulation or
intonation which becomes firmer as obstacles are in closer proximity. Not only
can the rear view camera be readily installed on the car’s number plate, it is
theft proof and uses your phone via the Pearl app as your rear-view screen.
The biggest drawback
about the website is the fact that there was no mention about the cost of the Pearl
Rear Vison. According to (Burgett, 2016) the cost of Pearl Rear Vsion is $500. Comparing
that price to other products from two website articles by (Vazharov & Stefan,
2016) as well as from (Top 10 Reviews, 2016), it is obvious that an average
backup camera costs much less than the Pearl Rear Vision.
However, if cost is taken out of the equation it is easy to
understand why Pearl Rear Vision is one of the best backup cameras in the
market. According to (Pearl Auto, 2016), Pearl Rear Vision provides a 180-degree
range of vision which is higher than any other product from the website article
(Top 10 Reviews, 2016). Unlike most after-market wireless backup cameras which
require a complicated installation process with running wires through the car,
the Pearl Rear Vision is absolutely wireless as it is solar powered. (Etherington,
2016) describes the night vision capabilities of the Pear Rear Vision as such,
“better than what you’d get from any OEM backup cam system I’ve used thus far,
let alone inexpensive aftermarket options from Amazon”.
In conclusion, if cost is not an issue then the Pearl Rear
Vison is the go to after-market backup camera. However if cost is the issue,
according to (Gannon, 2016) Pearl provides a three year guarantee for the
product and also according to (Jordan, 2016) in the case of theft, Pearl will replace the product; just sent them the
OBD adapter.
References:
Pearl Auto (2016). Rear Vision: A Redefined Wireless Backup
Camera System. Retrieved from https://pearlauto.com/about
Vazharov, Stefan, & Mastine-Frost, Justin. (2016). 10
Reliable Backup Camera Picks for Your Car. Retrieved May 4, 2016 from http://www.bestproducts.com/cars/auto-accessories/g213/backup-cameras-for-your-car/
Top 10 Reviews (2016.) Rear-View Cameras Reviews. Retrieved September
26, 2016 from http://www.toptenreviews.com/home/auto/best-rear-view-cameras/
Etherington, Darrel. (2016). Pearl’s RearVision is a backup
camera for those who want the best rear view. Retrieved September 27, 2016 from
https://techcrunch.com/2016/09/27/pearls-rearvision-is-a-backup-camera-for-those-who-want-the-best-rear-view/
Kahn, Jordan. (2016). Ex-Apple engineers made this $499
rearview backup camera that uses iPhone as a display. Retrieved June 21, 2016 from
https://9to5mac.com/2016/06/21/pearl-rearview-backup-camera-iphone-display/
Dear Karthig,
ReplyDeleteAfter reading your product summary, this are my comments
1. For website URL, there isnt any need of using quotation marks.
2. Reducing of transitional words like however and in conclusion. Example: However, if cost is taken out of the equation it is easy to understand why Pearl Rear Vision is one of the best backup cameras in the market >>> Assuming the cost is taken out of the equation it is easy to understand why Pearl Rear Vision is one of the best backup cameras in the market.
3. Good usage of APA style to cite your sources
4. Good compairison from other source as you try to compair and state why is the other product better than the main product.
5. Sentence seems very casual. Example: Pearl will replace the product; just sent them the OBD adapter. >>> Pearl will replace the product, by sending them the OBD adapter.
Do hope that my comments will be useful for your new draft.
Regards,
Boris